Bite The Bullet
All characters in this story, except for the Agent buggers, are kind of fictious. The Agents are very much alive and it is one of them who is writing this story. The others can be seen in the link that shows a Thumbnail display of my pictures in Flickr. Any resemblance to any real life character will not always be coincidental. Don’t be surprised if one of your names crops up somewhere.
Click on the Chapter name on the right under the “Bite The Bullet” tag to read that page.
Hi,
‘A man with a lot of go’.You have made the readers envision the cliffhanger.The diction is perfect.I find that u r influenced a lot by Robert Ludlum.His stories typically feature one man or a small group of individuals up against powerful adversaries.Analogously urs is also meticulously researched, replete with technical details.Another profession is in store for u…The flip side– Im finding it a bit melodramatic,knock it off .Can be more crisp and articulate…..its just a quibble..
“The name RAPTOR to BV was a foxy scheme..makes it more enjoyable…”
Thank you for your very honest opinion. I will cut down on the dramatics